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Corsaren's avatar

Great article! As someone who comes from a speechwriting background, I can comment a bit on the oratorical style. Namely, it is the sort of style that you ought to mix into your writing with some restraint—it is often best deployed for argumentative punctuation rather than persuasion.

While sentence level rhetorical devices such as parallelism and particulars are ubiquitously useful, the deployment of flowery rhetoric is best reserved for when you already have the reader largely on your side. Its usefulness lies in its ability to stir a sympathetic audience to action rather than compel an antagonistic one into agreement.

You can see this dynamic in, say, courtroom arguments, where despite being orally delivered, a closer will adopt a Classic or other stylistic tone to present facts of the case or discuss legal intricacies, reserving the rhetorical flourishes for the call to action of a verdict or opinion.

As an example, I think the ending of my Bees essay is a pretty close approximation to how I typically write oratorical rhetoric, and in some ways the entire essay builds to that finale (which was written somewhat early in the process). It’s fun and leaves a lasting impression, but you really gotta earn it.

Oratorical content is also, imo, a lot more work than the other styles. You have to pay attention to the rhythm and sound of words, and you can’t afford to have your reader stop and re-read a sentence in confusion since the kinetic energy is so important. It’s also highly audience-relative since you are trying to inspire specific emotions.

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Gem's avatar

Really enjoyed this, very useful framing!

I read (and loved) Steven Pinker's A Sense of Style but I don't think the classic style should be used everywhere. IMO it definitely should be used more in academia though 🙈

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